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Title: Jennies on the Block

Author: QwizzicalBE

Breast Content: 2

Plot and Theme: 2

Characters and Detail: 3

Technical Ability: 4

Originality/Fun: 3

Total: 14

Summary: This is a well-written story, but I am not particularly fond of fan-fiction, especially Hollywood stars. An author who chooses to write about that topic needs to do something more creative with them than just have them in the story. The story is also not very complex or exciting, and the plot does not make a whole lot of sense. I gave the story an extra point for including butt expansion, because I like that fetish. However, it did not do much with the characters after their expansion, so I cannot rate it very highly.

Title: Julia's Vacation

Author: Yossarian

Breast Content: 4

Plot and Theme: 3

Characters and Detail: 3

Technical Ability: 3

Originality/Fun: 4

Total: 17

Summary: This story surprised me. When I started reading about the flower shop, I expected it to be a rather mundane story with little excitement. However, there are a lot of good transformation scenes here, and the story came across as very sexy. It is definitely worth reading. I knocked a few points off for detail and technical writing, which I feel is the weakest point.

Title: Mickey Tangible

Author: Blake Isaac Gordon

Breast Content: 3

Plot and Theme: 4

Characters and Detail: 5

Technical Ability: 4

Originality/Fun: 3

Total: 19

Summary: I love the plot and detailed world in this story. Blake has created a pretty interesting setting for his characters to live in. It’s presented and executed very well, and for that I am giving it a high score. However as a BE story, I feel that this drags in some places and takes too long for good transformations to happen. I had to force myself to continue reading at a few points within the story because I was losing interest and couldn’t see the story progressing into something I liked. I felt that the ending was sort of “forced” upon the reader in order to wrap things up. (ie Let’s do the Mega Happy Ending!) Even so, this is one of the better stories written for the contest.

Title: Time and Time Again

Author: Quadhouse

Breast Content: 4

Plot and Theme: 3

Characters and Detail: 4

Technical Ability: 3

Originality/Fun: 5

Total: 19

Summary: This is a really interesting story. I think it has some of the best breast transformation scenes of all the contest stories. However, I do not feel the plot was thought through well enough, and the story feels too segmented. There is groundwork here for a truly awesome story, but without a lot more work, it will remain average with potential. Quadhouse reminds me a lot of Eliot Cayne – his stories are fun and original, and have a lot of personality, but they are very raw and unrefined. If Quadhouse had a co-author to bounce his ideas off of and take them and mold them, it would be a powerful combination. Still, a good story.
Title: Therapy

Author: A. L. Spragg

Breast Content: 2

Plot and Theme: 1

Characters and Detail: 2

Technical Ability: 3

Originality/Fun: 1

Total: 9


Summary: There’s not much to this story at all. It’s just a quick BE scene, and not a very good one.

Title: To the Max (Prophet Tenebrae)

Author: Prophet Tenebrae

Breast Content: 2

Plot and Theme: 3

Characters and Detail: 3

Technical Ability: 4

Originality/Fun: 2

Total: 14



Summary: The writing for To the Max is good, but the story and plot are not very exciting to me. I also felt that the story bogged itself down in text too much, and had too many gaps between exciting things happening. It’s a good concept, but just not very fun to read.




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