Jiniee : Maha yudh kA aarambh Writer- gulshan Gaurav



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JiNIEE : Maha yudh kA aarambh

Writer- Gulshan Gaurav (mob- 7569115944)

Getup and looks

Shaan- simple college Guy, fit, hlki dadhi(beard) rkhta hai,undercut haircut.wheatish

Ginee- new trend ki trh lambi dadhi(beard) aur lamba overcoat,ear rings,sar par patti jiske centre m rubee (ratna) lga hua h.

Veera- proffessional suit m pr naqabposh

Saaya- lucknow k purane nababo jaisa look,kurta pajama, kisi nawab ( raja) ki terah,ankho m surma.

Page 1


Raat ka samay, jiniee aur shaan Terrace k chor p baithe hue h pair (legs) latkaye hue.

Age lgbhg 20 sal (shaan) aur jiniee ( dikhne m 25-26 but real m 50)

FRAME-1; Jiniee udas hai,

Frame 2: aur shaan use apne kandhe se uske kandhe ko marta h

Shaan- oye kya ho gaya? Ab to hum superheros ho gaye yar, pichle hafte jo karnama humne kiya public m, Sare log jante hai hume, ab to, khus ja bhaii...

Jiniee- Mujhe is earth k aayam (dimension) m aana hi nhi chhaiye tha, tum samaj nhi rhe ho shaan, humse galti hui, mujhe jinnlok shaktiyo ka itni jyada matra m prayog nhi krna chahaiye tha

Frame3:.

(Jinee dara hua hai, )

Wo log mujhe dhund lenge,mai yaha 40 salo se is aayam m mai bachta fir rha unse,pr hamare itni jyada powers use krne k karan,unhe aabhas jarur ho gaya hoga. Tmhari jaan ko bhi khatra ho skta h shaan.

Frame 4; Shaan- bhaijaan dara mt mujhe, (shaan hasta hai pr jinee ko serious dkh wo chup ho jata h aur samaj jata h k problem real hai)

Frame-5: dara hua ginee

Frame 6; Ginee- mai aane wale yudh ko mahsush kr skta hu. Shaan tm apne jaise kitne jadugar ko jaante ho, jo vishwas layak ho? Hame sbko ek jut krna hoga, hum akele unka muqabala nhi kr payenge.

Page 2

Frame1;

Shaan : jadugar kuch ko to mai jaanta hu, pr mai tmhe sbke sabne expose nhi krna chahta. Kuch internet se connected hai, pr tum jyada hi serious ho rhe.koi tmhe q marna chahega?

Ginee - yhi to mai apne bachpan se soch rha hu, mai kisi ki shakal nhi dekh paya, wo mere picche the,mere guru k poore ashram m unhone sbko mara, mai bs kisi trh aayam badalne k jadu ko prayog kr bch gaya.

Frame 2;

Shaan- pr whi jaadu use kr tum wapis jinlok k aayam m ja skte the??

Jinee- maine kosis kri, pr wo jaadu maine phli aur akhri dfa istemal kra tha, usme bahut icchaskti ki jarurat pdti h, aur ise prayog krna bhi hamre rajya m gairkanooni h..

Frame 3: (Tbhi picche kuch chiz sarsari..)

Frame 4; Shaan aur jinne turant palte,aur unhone dekha ek kali billi

SFX (meowwww) jo bhag gyi.

Frame 5; Shaan- bhai ye to bs billi thi,

Jinee- nhi shaan, billiyo ki ankhe andhere m chamakti h, iski nhi thi.Hume nikalna hoga yaha se shaan kahi door.

Frame 6: Shaan soch m pdta hai haan uski ankhe

Page 3


Frame 1; shaan- accha pr kaha?? Aur mai apni mom ko kya bolunga k world tour p ja rha, wo aise hi pareshaan hongi.

Frame 2: jinee shaan k kandhe pr hath rkhte hue kehta hai

jinee- nhi tum nhi, ye meri ladai h,tum isme mt uljho, waise bhi 4 salo se tumne mujhe apana bhai mana, yahi kafi h.

Frame3; kandhe se hath hatate hue shaan kehta h

Shaan- jyada senti hone ki jarurat nhi, waise bhi tumne mujhe puri vidya (jaadu) sikhai nhi hai, aur abhi to tmhare bahut sare jadu k picche ka science btana to baki h. �� Kal k mere magic show k bd chalte h.

Caption


( Shaan magic shows krta hai The magician k nam se,phle wah youtube pr viral hua aur fir jagah jagah uske khud k shows hone lge, khas bat ye hai k wo ek mask pehen k show krta hai,public m craze lane k liye )

Frame 4; Jinee - thik h

Frame5;/

Caption


Agle din

Ginee sare saman pack kr rha hai,

Frame 6; /frme seven chhote chhote frames

pr tbhi wo shocked hota hai aur bhagta hai,

Page 4

Frame 1/frame2


(Bhagte hue wo dhuaa bn kr keyhole se nikal jata hai aur sidhe Shaan k show pr pahuchta hai, wha show just kahatm hua tha, jinee ko kahi shaan dikhai nhi deta )

Frame 3; (wo sidhe dressing room m ghusta h keyhole se pr ek baccha dekh leta h)

Frame 4; Ek baccha- Mummu ek admi us keyhole se undr chala gaya.

Mom- chal jhutte, jadu ka show dkh liya to, (wo uske cheeks ko thapki deti h)

Frame 5; Baccha us keyhole ko dekhta hai aur chala jata h mom k sath.

Frame 6;


Ginee shaan ko Undr shaan behos ghayal pda hua dekhta hai, aur wo jakhmi hai.

Frame7; Ginee uske sar pr hat rkhta hai aur wo achank se hos m aata hai.

Page 5

Frame 1; Ginee- Kon tha wo? Kya tumne apne show m mere btaye hue jinlok ki shaktiyo ka prayog kiya??



Shaan - haan thoda to kiya tha bs..( aaah)

Frame 2; Ginee- tmhe nhi krna chahaiye tha, unlogo ne is urja ko abahas kiya aur tm tk pahuch gye,jaisa k maine kiya.

Frame 3; Jinee ka dhyan picche k body pr gy

Jinee -- ye kon hai??

Frame 4; Shaan - maine apne naye device se bs ise bilji ka jhatka diya,

( Ghayal shaan k hatheli (palm) k centre m ek chhota sa device hai jisse hlki hlki chingari fut rhi, ye device dikhne m kuch is terah hai k centre wala part thumb aur charo ungliyo k bich se ek palti si metal ki body se supported hai aur ye dono trf palti metal bodies shaan k wrist( kalai) m pde round bracelet se connected hai.)

Frame 5; Shaan kahrahe hue utha hai.

Jinee us body se naqab hata hai aur

Frame 6;(short frame)uske sar pr hath rkhta hai,

Frame 7(short) pr body k ankh khulte hi use shaan (mask m) dikhta hai aur

Frame 8; (short)wah kaale dhuye n badal kr gayab ho jata.

Page 6

Frame 1; Shaan- maine ise kahi dekha hai.

Ginee- ye nhi ho skta, ye jin lok se avaidh tarike se aanewale jinn hai,tum inhe nhi jaante hoge. Ab chalo hume aj rat hi nikalna hai,

Frame2; (Ginee shaan ka show wala mask hatata h) shukr h wo jo bhi tha,usne tmhara chehra nhi dekha.

Shaan- kahi to dekha h maine,kaha dekha hai ise,?

Frame 3;

Caption


Yaaha se door doosare aayam m.

(Ek kala saya jiska face thik se nhi dikh rha, bs abash ho rha k uska get up nawab typ hai, dadhi thodi lambi,sar p safa.)

Saaya- veere tu ek aam jadugar aam insan se pita,

Frame 4; Veera- Wo aam ladka nhi,wo powerful hai, usne jinlok ki shaktiyo ka istemal kiya,mtlb wo janta hai jinee kaha hai.wo jinee ko janta hai.

Saaya - (muskurate hue) accha to us ghonchu rajkumar ka ab ek shishya bhi hai.

Frame 5; aaka wo shishya jinie se jyada taqatwar malum pdta hai.

Saaya-- dimag kharab h tmhara, bahane marte ho?? Mujhe jiniee chahaiye kisi bhi halat m, warna hum sbki itne salo ki mehnat mitti m mil jayegi.

Frame 6; saaya- waise wo ladka kaisa dikhta hai?

Veera- pata nhi aaka usne naqab pehna tha,ek lamba sa overcoat aur brown shoes.

Frame 7; shaan ko magician k getup m dikhana hai

Caption-...aaka Log use "The magician" bula rhe the.

KYO BHAGA THA JINIEE APNE LOK SE..KON LOG THE USKE PICCHE? JINIEE KON SE YUDH KI BAAT KR RHA..? Janiye UFC k Jinie ko meri nazar se..


To be continued .......




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