Revision Checklist for a Narrative Unit 1 Did I grab the reader’s attention with my first sentence?
Revision Checklist for a Narrative – Unit 1
Did I grab the reader’s attention with my first sentence?
Did I describe the setting – the where and the when?
Did I introduce the characters in my story?
Am “I” in the story? (
I describe what I saw
, heard, smelled, tasted, and touched?
Did I describe my thoughts about the situation?
Did I describe my feelings about the situation?
Is my story focused on one situation (a fight)?
Is my story easy to follow?
Is my story told in logical order? (sequence)
Did I use transition words (time and order words) in my story?
Did I tell about the risks involved?
Did I tell the consequences of the risks involved?
Did I resolve the situation in my story?
Last, did I keep the reader’s attention throughout the story?
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