The park was abandoned when she saw it. So abandoned that she could hear her head pound, like little hands clamoring to escape prison. On a nearby bench, she saw an afternoon paper—the crossword halfway complete—and she sat next to it, grateful for its lifeless company. The wind blew and sent the leaves swirling and brushing up against her boney, exposed ankles. She tightened the scarf around her neck and pulled it up so that her mouth was covered, looked at her watch, and waited. Waited. Waited. It was evening when she finally saw him through the harsh darkness.
What is the difference between the first and second paragraphs?
Mood/feeling for Paragraph 1: __________________
Mood/feeling for Paragraph 2: __________________
What words or phrases in particular lead you to your answer for #1?
Which words or phrases in particular shed light on the setting?
What effect does setting have on characters and mood?
REMEMBER: How you choose to describe your setting will affect the way your reader feels about your piece. Do you want the reader to feel fear or tension? Or do you want them to feel warm and happy? Determine the mood you want to create before take on the task of describing your setting.
PRACTICE: Start with this scene: “The waves crashed across the sand, and I knew….” Write the beginning paragraphs of two short stories. Change the mood of each story as you open the story, focusing on setting.